Real Zombie Shit - Comments

(“AHH, WHAT THE FUCK!?” Jack yelled, then stopped and blinked. “I...I didn’t feel anything.”)
That made me laugh way harder than it should have. Idk man, I would probably shit bricks if I had to survive, even if a game, zombies... I mean. I try to talk myself into horror games, then I get so scared I have to have someone in room with me.x'D...

I adore this. I think it's really neat, I'm gonna have to come back and complete this story.

First off, I love the title. Second of, this is really good. I can't wait for more!

I really like this, the thought of surviving in a zombie infested place is pretty cool, as if the virtual reality stuff.. unique plot line and I love it. XD

the thought of zombies scares me. .-. but this is pretty interesting, not gonna lie. i'm not one for zombies, but i'm hoping you'll update this. xD also, one thing: try not to start paragraphs with quotes. but other than that, awesome job. i love the virtual, inside-the-game thing goin' on. c:

Weird, Your story has a character named Raven, as well as mine O.o And yours is an alternate reality world as well as mine... Cool :D