Take your Hand in Mine - Comments

I won't lie, this is the stereotypical plot u_u but everyone loves them anyways, I love it so I won't be a hypocrite and I won't bitch about this being exactly like other stories, I think I have a weak spot with this plot. I love it, I think I'll love you're story! Update soon!

This is really good. I'm excited!!

One of the more common plots. everyone picks this once in a while. it's great that these stories are there.
I must say one thing though. it doesn't seem right. I know it's meant to be Andy living in darkness and Ashley living in light but even the darkest life has it's bright sides that I don't think Andy has. and Ashley's life. is unrealistic sweet. just like Andy's is too sad to be lived.
Keep on doing your awesome work. Keep on writing what you're writing cause you shouldn't let a b*tch like me turn you down. but think about this next time you publishes a story.