Causing Havoc; As Time Moves On... - Comments

Ooooh fun fun.

Yay new chapter!
I loved it ^-^
HOWEVER i do have a few points... The layout of the page makes it abit difficult to read continuity and pacing wise. Maybe it's because it's on the right side of the page instead of the left... But that could just be me xP
ALSO I think some greater detail into what they're actually doing would be nice. Like all of a sudden his eyes turned black and plague fell asleep. I know it's fairly obvious what happened; but an extra word here and there wouldn't hurt >.<
ANYWAY it was great... I loved it... Need a new chapter... Like now... Awesomes...

damn net sending it loads of times :/

wooo!

woooo!

woooo!

yeah!
I know it's just filler, but it's kept the unquenchable thirst for more of this; sated for now xP
BEWARNED though... If i have to wait years for the next chapter there'll be HELL TO PAY!!

Woo for a new chapter!
The final few paragraphs seemed a bit rushed though. One moment she was in the house and it felt that by the next line she was talking to Guardian. If you get my meaning?
But it was good other than that ^-^

Schweet... I haven't written in so long! Perhaps this will inspire me?
It's lookin good so far!

@ AngelOfBlood
Yes, yes we are :)

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