@Writer in the Rye Thank you! I love it when people enjoy my stories. :) There may or may not be another chapter, it really depends on how busy I am. But I do plan on making one!
Terrible? I heartily disagree! I'm very interested to see what adventures are yet to come for the two girls! You did really well with descriptions and I could picture everything so vividly. I also like that this story is different from what I've normally read. I'm excited. :) And first story post on Mibba! Congratulations - you're one of us now.