I know I've said this before but I really can't stress this enough. Billie is being SO incredibly cute! Especially now that her mom decided to be a bitch. She's quite lucky to have him :)
Don't worry, all authors want comments! You don't sound like you're begging. (: Cute chapter for sure. Good for them! I can't wait to see what happens next.
You're still doing a great job with this, Billie is very cute with her :) I don't think you moved things too fast, just think about where you want your plot to go from here, now they're back together.
You know what made me feel all warm and fuzzy? This update! haha No but seriously, you're doing great and the fact that he jumped off the stage so quickly. Absolutely adorable <3 I can't wait to read more!
Hey! Just thought I'd drop by and say that you're doing great with this and you don't need to worry about being new to writing! I think you're writing it very well. Like P&B, I'd be raging that he broke it off wanting to be single then turned up again with a girlfriend and brought her to his ex's HOUSE?! He needs a smack. Looking forward to more! :)