Imparem - Comments

I'll be honest and admit I, along with another who commented, didn't finish the whole thing because it's not completely not my tastes - not to mention hasn't been updated in a while. I will say, however, that your descriptions are wonderful and the writing has a mature feel to it which makes it a refreshing read to other stories here on Mibba.

I think I really like this comment swap thing. (Though I haven't received a single one in return) Ha It is giving me the opportunity to read some really great stuff. What saddens me about this is I see how long ago you posted this chapter with nothing else added to it. Such a pity.

You write quite beautifully and extremely eloquent. I too was captured by the overall layout, but the way you went into depth with nearly everything was phenomenal. It really was enlightening. I hope you eventually pick this back up as I would love to read more. Oh, and I love the use of Latin. It always seems to make things more interesting. Well anyway, thanks for a great read and if you ever pick it back up, I hope you'll let me know!

I didn't read the whole thing because to be honest, it wasn't my type of story. But WOW the description and good job on the richness of the writing itself. You lost me a bit in the description of what she was, but I think that was just me not really being into supernatural type of stories. Nice layout as well, though the picture of the girl was a little creepy. Overall, good job! Keep writing

This is a brilliant story! You use such powerful and stein adjectives which really push the story further and make it enjoyable. The first paragraph was one I especially enjoyed, with your use of emotive language and I could picture it all so well. I think my favourite bit was about the droplets and them the cleansing of the person. It seems very deep and well thought out. Brilliant! Really enjoyed reading this!

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I have to admit, the first thing that drew attention to your book was the layout. It gives us some type of picture of what the story is going to be about. I've always loved reading these types of books, fantasy books are just my thing.

I love your writing style, its beautiful! I have no negative things to say about this piece of writing, because it was that good. You drew me in from the beginning, thought at first I was like "What are Sun Showers?" but then I read on and found out what they were about :P

You just describe everything perfectly. I'm recommending this book because its so good! I can't wait until the next update!

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I love the layout; really draw you in! You have such a great way of writing, your personification is fantastiv, and I feel I am there. I like the way you introduced your characters, it's exciting and mysterious. Your name choices are also good, they're unusual without being too out there. I would love to see the plot progress further!

I like the very beginning with the relation between the sun showers and Mercury. I like the use of language and the details. I also like the odd name of Caelum, because it reminds me of a variation of Caleb. I hope that this turn into a full story and maybe eventually you'll make a layout for this. :)