THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER I SWEAR TO GOD. I literally used to come home from school and the first thing I did was check if it was updated oh my god. It's amazingly written and the story line is perfect, I love how there isn't any huge drama. You should do like a one shot sequel of like the future or something because I really want to know if they get married and oh my god I would LOVE you forever. You are awesome and thank you for writing such an amazing story!!:)
After reading your oh so sweet comment you left me I stumbled upon this story and I gotta say this was so wonderfully written. The plot isn't 100% my cup of tea and I usually don't like first person POV BUT this was just so so so well done I love reading it from the start to the end (in one go!-- go me!) and I just want to say I adore the way you write. You are wonderful and thank you for writing this story :) nothing but love and adoration for you!
"She's become the Wendy Darling to my Peter Pan and I really fucking liked that" I love how that line just sums up everything about how Alex feels for Riley! I can't wait to see them grow closer and Alex maybe getting Riley to speak...