Here Comes the Sun - Comments

@ hawker!

Thank you! It's really encouraging to read comments like yours. I was searching up all of the surfing stories here on mibba, but there are only a few that go on past chapter two, and those that do are really confusing and frankly not very good. I was eager to try something new :)

I'm really lovin' this so far! Alana seems like a really chill girl and this is really easy to read. I don't see many surfing stories here and so it's really refreshing to see one. I'm really excited to read about what happens to her in Hawaii - keep up the awesome work! :D

@Erin.Grace.

Thanks so much! I've been trying to get to the part where they move to Hawaii soon, because that's where all the exciting stuff happens. Sorry for any short chapters- I'll try to write more in the future! :)

I love it so far! my only complaint is the shortish chapters! I hate getting into a chapter and then it ends abruptly

@The-Maine-Becky

Thank you so much! I'll be posting more soon :)

This story sounds good so far, I loved the part where you described the waves and surfing. I'm interested to see how it turns out!