such good news :D
April 27th, 2014 at 09:41pm
@ Jalex Gaskaranth
Thanks! All time low is amazing btw
The Missy Diaries - Comments
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March 2nd, 2014 at 10:26pm
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I actually really enjoyed reading this story. I had never really heard of Dudesons all that much, but I had heard of Jackass. So, seeing how they were similar, I really ended up liking this story. It was also very well written. Good job!February 23rd, 2014 at 07:52pm
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nah is ok :)December 9th, 2013 at 11:59pm
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@ moria
Still not quite finished:( I've had the craziest scheduleDecember 9th, 2013 at 11:43pm -
awww :3December 9th, 2013 at 02:18pm
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@ moria
Thank you!December 3rd, 2013 at 03:28pm -
great update girl :DDecember 3rd, 2013 at 01:34pm
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@ canadianrose
Thanks!November 25th, 2013 at 06:34am -
@ proffessor_kickflip
That's good. Good luck with your story and I wish you the best! :)November 25th, 2013 at 04:26am -
@ canadianrose
Well, I accept criticisms of all kinds.November 24th, 2013 at 11:36pm -
@proffesor_kickflip
No problem! I find that a lot of people don't want to give criticism because even if it's constructive it can be hurtful or taken the wrong way.November 24th, 2013 at 04:59pm -
@ canadianrose
Thanks! I know i need constructive critsism and only two people have given me any so far.November 24th, 2013 at 06:27am -
I found this story from comment swap. I'm not sure if I had a hard time getting into the story due to the fact that I've never seen Jackass, or what. I found that your story was a little jumpy and choppy. I think if you fleshed out and added details, it would vastly improve your work. Potentially another reason I was struggling was her openness to talking to strangers and giving her personal information out, which seemed slightly unrealistic to me. There are a couple of kinks, but it's a good start.November 24th, 2013 at 05:59am
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I found this story from comment swap. I'm not sure if I had a hard time getting into the story due to the fact that I've never seen Jackass, or what. I found that your story was a little jumpy and choppy. I think if you fleshed out and added details, it would vastly improve your work. Potentially another reason I was struggling was her openness to talking to strangers and giving her personal information out, which seemed slightly unrealistic to me. There are a couple of kinks, but it's a good start.November 24th, 2013 at 05:59am
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@ moria
Thanks:)November 22nd, 2013 at 03:34am -
awww amazing update :DNovember 22nd, 2013 at 12:04am
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@ moria
Thanks :DNovember 10th, 2013 at 05:15pm -
ahaha Putrid Intercourse is epic, also awwww HP :3
love it!November 10th, 2013 at 01:46pm -
omg awwww
(and update, is all so cute)November 9th, 2013 at 02:57am
