Fake Sounds of Progress - Comments

Wow that's interesting that Zacky's been having dreams about the demon and Lola, and I'm wondering how he's connected with all of this.

Damn that would be so freaky to suddenly lose nine hours, but it's kinda of refreshing to see Zacky acting normally toward her for the moment.

@ Sai.
Thank you sooo much!!! :)

@ Sai.
Thank you! :D

This is a great plot and has a ton of potential! The first chapter caught my eye immediately and I could really relate and understand Lola's feelings. That's such a pretty name, by the way. Anyways, my skin crawled when she made the deal, but I'm glad she did because it's definitely going to shake things up! I think the writing is very well done, the words have a sort of flow that makes it hard to look away, and I enjoyed every bit of the chapters. Great job on this, really!

Keep up the good work! I'll be recc'ing so that way more people can see it!

I'm loving this - damn she's got herself into a hell of a mess hasn't she? I'm wondering what he's going to want as payment.

Should be interesting when "the douche" arrives lol. I can smell fireworks :p

can't wait to see what's going to happen next

Love it already babe such s good plot line I'm interested to see where this goes :)