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  • steph goes rawr.

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    @ IceNineKiller
    Hahaha exactly! :)
    September 9th, 2013 at 03:38am
  • IceNineKiller

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    Bwahahaa the white oak from the vampire diaries. :3
    September 9th, 2013 at 03:25am
  • Tiffany Purdy

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    Yess! This is about to get really good, I can tell!!
    September 9th, 2013 at 03:25am
  • ScoutNikhol

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    Awesome update. :) makes me miss Chris tho. Lol
    September 7th, 2013 at 04:36am
  • ScoutNikhol

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    Awesome update. :) makes me miss Chris tho. Lol
    September 7th, 2013 at 04:36am
  • Tiffany Purdy

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    I just read the last two updates and they were both great! Poor Gabby though :/
    September 6th, 2013 at 08:14pm
  • IceNineKiller

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    Kas once again. I loved it. :)
    September 6th, 2013 at 05:26pm
  • IceNineKiller

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    @ steph goes rawr.
    Aahaha
    September 6th, 2013 at 05:26pm
  • StarxDust

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    I started reading this story a couple of days ago, and I'm really enjoying it (both of them actually :D). The one thing that is slightly annoying is how each chapter is half of the previous chapter. I understand that their from different people and perspectives, but is it necessary to have half of the next chapter the same as the last? Isn't the point of a new chapter to have all new material? If it was a shared dream, a flash-back, flash-forward, over hearing a conversation.. and so forth I feel it would be more appropriate.

    Maybe instead show experiences like more of each person hanging out with their significant other instead of just repeating a scene twice unless its a drastic change in views.

    The characters personalities really come through in their actions and words. I loooooooove how protective the boyfriends are... I'm the kind of girl that adores chivalry and at times this story makes my heart melt and at others I just wanna scream at them for being ignorant or having a lack of understanding for a situation.

    Overall I really enjoy this story, I'm not trying to be harsh and if I sound harsh I'm sorry I'm just trying to give you feedback to help you improve your story :)
    September 6th, 2013 at 06:10am
  • steph goes rawr.

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    @ IceNineKiller
    Hahaha that's the whole point :)
    September 5th, 2013 at 08:06pm
  • IceNineKiller

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    Kas: your chapter was awesome.

    Steph.....I hate Ricky in this chapter
    September 5th, 2013 at 06:36pm
  • thanksforthat

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    i fangirled when i saw the sequel.
    September 5th, 2013 at 11:38am
  • Tiffany Purdy

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    Uh oh!!
    September 4th, 2013 at 01:00pm
  • piercethehotpockets

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    Ahhhhhhhh that was great. Yay sequel (:
    September 3rd, 2013 at 09:22pm
  • Dickmcnugget

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    Jesus fuck dat first chapter <3
    September 3rd, 2013 at 07:44pm
  • lacerated lullaby

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    wait what a sequel?! awesome! great first chapter!!!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 06:52am
  • colorfultears

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    Omg what a fantastic first chapter!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 06:04am
  • IceNineKiller

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    Damn dude. Great first chapter
    September 3rd, 2013 at 06:02am
  • Tiffany Purdy

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    This is going to amazing! Something wouldn't let me go to sleep and now I know why! :D Now I can sleep peacefully and read more another day haha
    September 3rd, 2013 at 05:49am
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