Ehehehehe! I love it. I rarely ever find stories that I really adore, but I'm kind of already adore this. It flows really well and it's just so... hot, aha. And it was only the first chapter! The layout is gorgeous too. I'm totally looking forward to reading more and finding out what is going to happen between Danika and Brian. Can't wait for the next update, lovely.
Oh, and before I end this, I found one typo in the fifth paragraph that I thought I'd let you know about. :) "When se felt even lonelier was when she felt them."
Haha thank you! I will as soon as I get the next chapter finished!