September 5th, 2013 at 06:28pm
Well first of all, I'd like to point out that you didn't follow all the rules. I asked you to copy the secret into the summary, so people would know what you are writing about. Also I'm missing the word count in the summary and author's note.
This is a minus for me, but of course, the story itself is way more important!
I liked it. It was simple, but sufficient. You explained his feelings well enough. Nicely done!
Oh shit, i'm sorry, I was so late that I forgot to read the rules before posting it ;-;