Currently Seeking: A Life - Comments

@ hawker!
Hello! Thank you for that comment! I've been putting a lot more thought into this story than any I've written so far, so I'm glad to know it's showing :) I just hope I can keep it up and you're comment has given me some serious motivation. It's always nice to hear that someone is enjoying something I've written.

You have a really charismatic writing style! Violet is a very relatable and compelling narrator and it's interesting to hear about her life and how she's unhappy with it, yet she has dreams and hopes and lord knows we can all identify with that at some point. Jimmy seems interesting so far too, and he already has a great chemistry with Violet. Working at a coffee shop is a great setting, too, and I like how her work intersects with her life and the setting plays a part in the story. It's a really nice touch, and you've got an awesome start! I can't wait to read more! :)