I Won't Say Anything at All - Comments

@ Ramsassy1712
Anytime! I know when I was going through it, I needed a friend so I'm always happy to help.
I also loved the update. It was amazing and I'm happy that you will use my suggestion.
I hope things are getting better. Until next time, my friend.

@ frankieraepain
Thanks for your suggestions! I'm always looking for feedback on how to make my writing better. And thanks for the support I appreciate it. Its nice knowing that there are people like you out there. It makes dealing with jerks less terrible. And I'm about to update in a few minutes. Hopefully you enjoy it. And I will definitely use your suggestions in my next chapter.

Okay so I just finished reading the rest of the story and I love it! I'm so happy Josh found her and that she is still alive.

One of your Author Notes have caught my attention and it really upsets me. And I just want to let you know that I'm sorry butthole jerks are making you feel depressed. If you need anything, I am here. My senior year in high school was not the best and it sucks, it's supposed to be one of the happier high school years you have and to have people ruin it, makes me upset. I hope things get better for you, hun.
If you need someone to talk to you can always message me or text me, I'll give you my number.

Keep writing! And update soon, I'm really enjoying this story.

So I'm only on chapter three and I'm already digging this story. I just have a few things I'd like to say before I continue on. Okay so you should put spaces, like start a new paragraph, in between each character talking. Also some grammer mistakes but who doesn't have that sometimes, right? And one last thing putting 'haha' really isn't correct grammer because you can just easily say 'chuckled' or 'laughed'.
I'm not trying to be mean but just giving you suggestions. I know when I look for a new story to read I look for these things. It makes the story easier to read and you won't get what a character says mixed up with what someone else is saying.
Okay so, I'm going to continue reading this amazing story.

@ Darcia_Lynn
Thanks, I appreciate it! :3

I Just started reading your story and I really like it! :)

@ somewhereinneverland
Awe thanks :$

this is really goooood. :3