Nothing Can Stand Against True Love - Comments

@ NikkiFoxy8
Oh thank you so much !!

I love it! Please update soon!

@ Narutoechelongirl
I'm hoping to have some this week. I'm getting the details of things just so. We'll have a new character soon!!!!!!

@ jessicarockythompson
Haha thanks girl , when will you update btw ?

hey, girl! I'm liking this so far. Cecelia sounds interesting and I like this concept. Looking forward to reading the rest!

Wow you like geez thanks !

Wow this is good keep working on it xxxx

@ Narutoechelongirl
You like?? Lol

Good job my friend !

Oh my god really thank you ! So much

Very interesting

This sounds like it's gonna be a very interesting piece. Can't wait to read more!

@ Narutoechelongirl
I'm not a writer, haha. But there are people looking for co writes. You can check on the blog section and search co writes.

@ HerNameIsAlice
OMG thank you for the tips ill make sure I do better next time ,I guess the excitement got to me ,do you want to be a co author btw I would love to have your help pretty pleeeease

Hey, sweetheart! This sounds like a fun story, but I'd like to give you a few pointers if you don't mind.

When you write,

"Yep , the most powerful , rich family around. Why am I not happy you say !? Well I can't flee the country cuz they threaten to kill my family and as much I hate my parents for doing this to me , it's my little sister I'm thinking about."

It should be,

"Yep, the most powerful, rich family around. 

Why am I not happy you say?!

Well, I can't flee the country cuz they threatened to kill my family and as much I hate my parents for doing this to me, it's my little sister I'm thinking about."

Just make sure to space between different characters' dialogue and space between paragraphs so it doesn't seem jumbled up. Also, don't space twice after using punctuation. Make sure it's attached to the end of the word you're writing and after that you space.

If you need a layout, you can ask Embracing Shadows.

I hope I didn't offend you!

Great story!