Wedding Crashers - Comments

Tehe I absolutely loved this.
I'm a big Matt and Jimmy fan but that doesn't mean I can't enjoy Brian stories ;)
I felt bad for Mandi in the beginning because I knew where she was coming from but she at least had the friends there for her.
But the whole wedding thing was cute, funny, and sexy.
I could totally see Brian doing something as crazy as that right as they were going to do speeches for a wedding haha that made me giggle.
I gushed big time as the whole "Marry Me" thing came up

Great story!
I just LOVE your writing :3

It was so sweet and cute. I really really enjoyed it!

I loved this. It was awesome. I mean I loved it like to bits and pieces. You did an amazing job.

omg this was so cute and cheesy in the most wonderfully amazing way! I love it! <3

@ darko.
Don't worry, it wasn't uncomfortably awkward... it was cute awkward, if you get what I mean. Haha. I'm sure a lot of people have had random proposals and/or talked about marriage during intimate times like that, so again, it was just realistic. Don't fret!

Awwww! I'm a lucky charm! I'm flattered. Oh yes....I forgot to mention how lovely the banner was. I wanted to lick the screen!

@ xMandiblesx
I'm glad you loved it. That really means a lot. I was actually considering turning these two into a story, but I have absolutely no idea where it'd go. But I think I solved my writer's block problem with this one-shot so you must be my lucky charm.

@ Damsel Of Darkness
Yes he does. Thank you. I tried not to make them perfect because it would have been so easy to make them just the perfect couple in this, so I tried to stray away from that. But yeah, thank you a lot. I hoped one person would get a laugh out of the end. I had intended on making it more detailed and longer but my fuse was running short and I wanted to get it finished before tomorrow since I promised her I'd have it done yesterday. And oh god, I wasn't even sure of what I was thinking with that little proposal. I probably should have taken it out but at least it wasn't too awkward, I hope.

The banner at the top... man, Brian looks so hot there. Hahaha.

I thought this was a cute story. I liked that you didn't make Mandi and Brian's relationship cookie cutter perfect. Like their first meeting wasn't really love a first sight and he'd fallen for her, even though her first impression wasn't really what she would've liked it to be. Hahaha. I also like that you made a point of saying their sex life was relatively normal and simple, because it made the relationship seem more real, in a way. Like it's not crazy, over the top and animal sex... it's comfortable, satisfying sex which is what long term relationships tend to have. So yeah, that was good. Hahaha.

I laughed at the end when they were busted... but at least it was recieved well and the bride didn't freak out! She was probably jealous she couldn't share a hot minute with her new husband, if anything hahaha

Overall, a great little one shot. The random and slightly awkward proposal in the middle of their sexual escapade was sweet too. Well done

Oh my gosh! I totally freakin loved it! Thank you so much. You have no idea how much it means to me that you took the time out to write me a story. I thought it was cute and sexy at the same time! That basically means it had everything and was perfect. I loved the dialogue. Brian is so sexy...omg.... I like your writing style too. It makes me want to go read the rest of your stories now. Thanks again, doll.