And in Your Eyes, I Saw Everything - Comments

  • kshelton2011

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    Goodness...If someone told me that "Someone is the one" then I would definitely take that as a hint. ((:
    September 27th, 2013 at 12:19am
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    @ EmptySighsAndWine
    You are very welcome ((:
    September 26th, 2013 at 11:55pm
  • EmptySighsAndWine

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    @ kshelton2011
    Thank you. :3
    September 26th, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • kshelton2011

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    @ EmptySighsAndWine
    Oh yay! ((: That is really lucky! I really like your writing, by the way.
    September 26th, 2013 at 11:44pm
  • EmptySighsAndWine

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    @ kshelton2011
    You're in luck. I just finished a chapter and it'll be posted very soon.
    September 26th, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • kshelton2011

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    Awh man! I was getting into it (: I can't wait for more!
    September 26th, 2013 at 11:28pm
  • lonely girl.

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    It's a very detailed start and gives two very different, yet uncannily similar situations of the princes. I like how they both are adamant about marrying, and the fact that now one thinks that the other is attractive it'll be a slash. Your descriptions are lovely, and I love Vladimir - how he steals to give to the poor, and does it without a damn.

    Your grammar is flawless, there's just a few slip ups in spelling and sentence structure. I probably won't be able to tune in for the rest of it, but I'll try my best.
    September 14th, 2013 at 03:01pm