Controlled Demolition - Comments

Ahhh God- The feels in this one. The "I love you" scene was totally making me want to kick some Pete-high school history teacher- ass! But that last sentence... *sighs* Great job with the description as always. It really brought this story to life for me. Will be sad to see it go. Waiting for yet another awesome chapter.

omfg i totally almost shit my pants when I saw you updated this. This wasn't what I was expecting, and I'm so frustrated with Pete like ughhhhhhhh. This was so heart breaking, Pete's just on a downward spiral :(

oh wow, that was so depressing :( the "I love you" scene broke my heart, the way he just ignored her. ugh Pete WHYYY.

I am so glad you updated! I love this so much!

I can't wait for the next update!

Oh I'm so glad you updated!!! I agree, meeting the boys gave me motivation

Ahh yay you updated! Although now I'm mad at Pete He's right, though, he's not her boyfriend, but that doesn't mean he shouldn't be courteous to her feelings.

Yay you met Pete!!
I love him, but right now in the story I wanna kick him so hard in the balls for being so rude

I'm missing the story so hardcore right now omg

Love this!

I want Lucy and Jess to become friends again but at the same time, I feel like that can't happen unless Lucy tells her about Pete (or makes up a huge lie) and I'm not sure how that would go down. Either she'd freak out and be happy for her, or she'd get jealous/angry/whatever and rat them out...hmm...

I love this story to pieces I hope you get motivation! And I don't like Pete's attitude but I guess that's what it's going to be since he's her teacher after all

I love how well you've keept them a secret, im fasanated how thisneven began for them and though i like the cute stuff i really want to sed where the nitty gritty leads to

Much<3 Kat

I love cutesy but I wanna see where this is going! My heart literally jumped when I saw you updated, no lie! I just hope kids at school don't find out or something and get Pete fired :O

Update!!!!!

For me, cutesy is good, but gritty is better. If you keep it cutesy all the time, it gets one dimensional, y'know? With that in mind, I'm excited to see where this story will be heading...

Ahh in so excited they're together now!! (Well I think they are)

only on chapter three but loving how realistic this seems so far :) and I'm totally killing my mouse to get to the next chapter. loving this.

omg. i've been reading this story since you first posted it but i don't think i've ever commented. after that chapter, though, god damn. usually when people write smutty scenes i'm just like, "yay they're finally doin' it!" but with this...oh my god. i don't even know, but i was INTO it, god DAMN. i'm hooked now. this is the end of me.