To Love a Lost Soul - Comments

Thank you I almost gave up on this but your comment just gave me inspiration to continue writing this book

Hi! This is a great story, and I think it will lead into something great! But, to improve your writing, I think you should work on your grammar a little more. Grammar is the key to a great story! Overall, this story is going great so far. Don't stop!

Thx XxDead_NekoXx I try also yes there was sexual content the story is nc-17. I tried to warn you at the beginning of the chapter sorry I'll try harder to warn those sensitive readers. Thx a million for the pointers

Woow got sent 2 times..sorry..

Hey, this is a great story, I'm really interested to read more chapters, I was a bit shocked when you introduced the sexual content, but I think it's pretty good, although, try to use as much correct grammar as you can, sometimes it's hard to understand, or the grammar takes away from the story, but otherwise, good job, keep writing!!

Hey, this is a great story, I'm really interested to read more chapters, I was a bit shocked when you introduced the sexual content, but I think it's pretty good, although, try to use as much correct grammar as you can, sometimes it's hard to understand, or the grammar takes away from the story, but otherwise, good job, keep writing!!