October 1st, 2013 at 06:04pm
You know this one my favorite story and now that you are re-writing it, I'm more than happy that I can actually read it. 
The summary was so-so but the first chapter blew me away. It was so sad, a child living in a house like that and the situations that unfolded before her very young eyes and the hurt her little young heart felt as well as the fear.
You were detailed enough, without getting boring and that's a big plus for the story. I can't wait to read the next one.
~Marian.
Did you start writing two POVs instead of one like in the previous version? The new version is way too different than the old one. I kind of like more the previous one.
Also, please change the layout. It's killing my eyes.