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  • Bunnies_haven

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    Please, please update!!
    February 20th, 2024 at 09:31am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Please update!!!
    April 23rd, 2020 at 06:10am
  • justme97

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    More more more!! I’m so hooked by this story!!!
    March 6th, 2020 at 06:21am
  • DestedDreams

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    Omg I can’t even. This was so hot. And so good. Please pick it back up!
    May 6th, 2019 at 07:53am
  • Laylylu

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    nooooooooo D: PLEASE COME BACK.
    August 15th, 2017 at 03:49pm
  • AJ9

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    Update? Please?? Oh go on ... you know you want to! Mr. Green
    February 28th, 2017 at 07:48am
  • AJ9

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    I miss this!! please update it again. Pleeeeease?!?!?!?!?!?!?
    February 24th, 2017 at 09:09pm
  • AJ9

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    Will you please continue with this story? You're an amazing writer and I'd love to read more of this. Please update this again soon xxx
    February 23rd, 2017 at 08:06pm
  • Dezi Demize

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    Wish you would update this story!
    November 9th, 2016 at 06:47am
  • Fuck You Mibba!

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    I just found this story and I absolutely love it. First, I love how real you made Amos' character. I also like to write stories with plus size women, makes the plot more believable and it's something that women like myself love to read about, because we are able to connect to the feelings and emotions of the characters. I have read quiet a few menage stories. I am very picky about it because the writer needs to know how to connect the emotions and understanding of each character involved in the relationship. You managed to intrigue me, because your ideal of this relationship is very well written. I like your style. It's sad that you haven't updated this story in so long because it is amazing. I hope you return to continue it. You have a great piece here. Love Matt and Brian's personalities. It shows that they really care about her.

    Please come back and update this amazing story!
    October 4th, 2016 at 04:12am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Please update this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 2nd, 2016 at 07:19am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    I really hope you're able to update soon! I love this story so much that I can't control myself.
    February 9th, 2015 at 06:17am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Ohemgeeeee!!!! I'm loving this story!!! I'm hoping that you update it soon though, as I see it's been awhile!!!
    October 2nd, 2014 at 08:31am
  • vengeance35

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    I just read this entire story in about the past hour and wow. I hope you update soon!! I really enjoy it.
    July 17th, 2014 at 10:40am
  • strawberrybubble

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    Please update soon =)
    June 4th, 2014 at 10:39pm
  • Evyliz15

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    Plz update im going through withdraws
    May 28th, 2014 at 03:42am
  • BehindGreenEyes

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    I hope you update this soon :-):-):-)
    May 14th, 2014 at 04:52am
  • Ailurophile

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    I miss this story :(
    May 3rd, 2014 at 11:20pm
  • Evyliz15

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    Please update again i really want to read more
    March 16th, 2014 at 02:39am
  • Lemo_X-rated_Romance

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    I adore this story. Do you know when you'll update again? I really hope there will be more because I enjoy your writing :)
    February 20th, 2014 at 11:24am
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