Secretly Done, Secretly Loved - Comments

Comment swap
This is a very good story. I really like how you manage to make your character real and lively, but I find the first chapter kind of fast paced. You kind of rush into the story which isn't always a bad thing. But I would slow it down a little.

@ fannie
Thanks! :D

Hi! I've read your story for the Comment Swap and I found it very sweet. I always believe in second chances in life. And that's what your story means to me. I like your characters. They are teens, Alex too in a way. But they're funny and nice. I think you have to be very young but your writing is already pretty good. So, my congrats! I wish you all the best! :)