Got this in comment swap and holy jesus do I not know how to make fucking comments on this. I mean for it's purpose this is great, I s'pose. I like Lena. She's feminine and sassy. I also like Arin. He's the boy next door who discovered viagra. It's not very descriptive? I don't know if it's meant to be. And I think their stamina sucked. Majorly. Maybe I'm just clueless with this kind of writing. Write a second part where Lena is knocked up. It would genuinely make me laugh hysterically. But yes. Sorry I wasn't at all productive...
September 11th, 2013 at 02:26pm
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