Ghost of You - Comments

I really wish you'd update this!!!

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Thanks for the input, and I'll edit it soon. I lost my last beta-reader to another "client" and have yet to find another.

I came here via your blog entry about comment swap and I have to say I'm glad I did. By the way, I'm taking this story's comment virginity right now.

I liked how the first chapter was deatiled enough and without being boring. That's always a plus for stories. Your chapter needs a slight editing though at parts. Nothing too major though.

I liked how the Master spoke, the air around his voice, the words he spoke. I liked the scene that unfolded on my mind as I read this piece and I hope the guy keeps his promises.

~Marian.