September 19th, 2013 at 02:20am
Shadows on the Moon - Comments
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Love it, Bane u was so close and thn u thought about Talia, idk what for she is dead her love for u is gone so forget about her she isn't coming back anytime soon, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)September 18th, 2013 at 05:48pm
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Still thinking about talia bane? I love our little one i wish age had someone Tp protect her;) love This story;) more pleaseSeptember 18th, 2013 at 02:41am
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@ CountryGirl712
Thanks for giving my story a try in spite of the fact that you haven't seen the movies. I'm sure that without that background it will be fairly hard to understand though. Thanks for the support regardless!
@ MoMo_92
I'm glad that you are enjoying my story! It makes my day whenever I get a review like that! I will probably get the next chapter up tomorrow sometime. I'm working on a new story and it has been taking me for a ride! Thanks for your kind words!
@ manda719
Yay! Thank you so, so much! I will now have a permanent grin on my face for the rest of the night, thanks to your sweet review. I hope to have the next chapter up tomorrow!September 17th, 2013 at 03:36am -
I am in Love with this story. It is so well written. I can't wait for the next part to be upSeptember 16th, 2013 at 09:32pm
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I'm loving this story, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)September 16th, 2013 at 07:31pm
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I have never seen the batman series, so I found it pretty difficult to understand what was going on. But the writing seemed pretty good. The description, the layout, I think that you have it all covered. Also, judging by these comments you seem to be a good storyteller as well, and I'm sure you are, I just don't really understand batman. Good job and keep writing!September 16th, 2013 at 05:43pm
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@ Alex160893
Thank you SO much Alex! That is such a great complement! I'm glad that you are enjoying my story and that you aren't finding it predictable. I tried hard to make it original and unexpected. I'm glad that you are finding it to be as I hoped. Thanks again!
@ M12798501R
I'm glad that you think Tiana is sweet. That was what I was shooting for, though I also wanted her to have a tough side. I hope that comes through as well. Thank you so much for your continued support. Every comment I get just makes me want to work harder for you all!September 16th, 2013 at 04:55am -
God shes so sweet ;) come Back soonSeptember 16th, 2013 at 02:01am
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Love this so much, it's not predictable like some other stories! You're an amazing writer :)September 16th, 2013 at 01:42am
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@ comingsummers
Yay :) i'm loving every bit of This story :) i'm really curious to know why is she lock upSeptember 15th, 2013 at 04:47am -
@ M12798501R
That was definitely a hard chapter to write. I can't tell you what happens next, but I think you'll like it!September 15th, 2013 at 04:30am -
Oh My god thats so cruel;( will tiana know true tenderness? Poor girl ;(September 15th, 2013 at 04:26am
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And your update mine;) tiana is so accepting of everything that comes fr baneSeptember 13th, 2013 at 09:11pm
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@ comingsummers
:) keep the good Work ;)September 13th, 2013 at 03:39am -
@ M12798501R
Thank you my dear! I'm glad that you are enjoying it! Next update will be tomorrow morning!September 13th, 2013 at 03:31am -
Oh My god its do perfect :) little one its so selfless update soon pleaseSeptember 13th, 2013 at 03:25am
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More more ;)September 11th, 2013 at 09:53am
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@ comingsummers
Do what your heart says:) btw still a great plotSeptember 11th, 2013 at 01:54am -
@ M12798501R
I'll be posting the second chapter in a little while, hopefully after reading it your fears will be put to rest. Thanks for the comment!September 11th, 2013 at 01:52am
Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews. You really push me to keep getting these chapters out as fast as I can! It is hard for Bane to let Talia go, because they were together for so long and their feelings for one another were so strong. Rest assured that Tiana gets her day though!
@ MoMo_92
I really didn't want him to pull away in that scene, but sometimes my characters have a mind of their own, and that was definitely one of those times. It's just hard for him to let go, but these things just take time. Thanks so much for the support!