October 16th, 2013 at 11:34am
The Blue Eyed - Comments
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It was really good! :)October 16th, 2013 at 11:24am
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Really good! Can't wait for moreOctober 13th, 2013 at 06:22am
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@ Narutoechelongirl
I will as soon as I can.September 22nd, 2013 at 04:43pm -
Noooo it was too short :( update soon plz :)September 22nd, 2013 at 03:12pm
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@ JackieWepps
Your welcomeSeptember 20th, 2013 at 03:42pm -
@ andybsgrapedog
that's also good ideas! hmm... that one could actually give me stuff for some more plot.
thanks so much!September 20th, 2013 at 09:52am -
@ JackieWepps
He can be the outcasted demon from hell or an angel that fell from heavenSeptember 19th, 2013 at 10:10pm -
@ andybsgrapedog
hmm... not such a bad idea except... he already knew that he wasn't growing older at that time since I planed on him being more than a hundred years older than her. remember the legends of the village has been told for ages. about that blue eyed. as I told it has been Andy all along.September 19th, 2013 at 09:58pm -
@ JackieWepps
When he was how old he is now like 19 he fell into this fountain that was deep into the woods that no one knew about and it caused him to become immortal and didn't know it until he stabbed himself and didnt die when Juliet killed herselfSeptember 19th, 2013 at 09:44pm -
@ andybsgrapedog
It sure would and since he can sense them too.
since you came up with this I'd like to ask you if you have any ideas how it's possible that Andy has lived this long. Of course one could be that he's a vampire but that's just too ordinary.September 18th, 2013 at 10:00pm -
I think a cool power would be able to control people's dreams. It's not very common to use in stories, but I think it would be a good power for this story.September 18th, 2013 at 08:10pm
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@ andybsgrapedog
I guess you already know that he won't do that.September 17th, 2013 at 04:45pm -
Yay they met and hopefully Andy won't make him forget this time!September 17th, 2013 at 02:10am
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@ andybsgrapedog
who won't want that?September 13th, 2013 at 10:19pm -
I hope Andy figures out a good plan... I want both of them to be happy...!September 13th, 2013 at 10:09pm
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@ andybsgrapedog
wow thanks so much! :) really!!! it makes me so happy! I honestly didn't expect people to like it that much this soon. it's great!September 13th, 2013 at 11:49am -
LOVED IT short but it was a good chapter none the less. really can't wait for more. I actually day dream a lot and this story actually made me start to day dream something almost exactly like this because its so good so far and THERE'S ONLY 3 CHAPTERSSeptember 12th, 2013 at 10:57pm
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Really interesting idea! Update soon!September 12th, 2013 at 07:49pm
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@ andybsgrapedog
I like that way of seeing things :)September 12th, 2013 at 08:59am
thanks. I'm glad you think so ^_^