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  • Narutoechelongirl

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    Update !!!
    November 21st, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • Usako

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    Shoot, I'm not even in A7X too much, but I love Repo! so you have got me hooked already, regardless! I love how you just jumped right into the knitty-gritty with no filler or buildup. It really confuses the reader, but in a good way. It makes the reader delve more into the Repo world without having to actually know the background of either fandom. It's a perfect sentiment for an AU. I cannot wait to read more with this sort of pace. Please keep that up!

    The only thing I have to criticize on is grammar, which is only minor. For example, break up your paragraphs a little more so they aren't blocked together as much, and watch out for capitalization and small typos. Other than that, a fantastic read so far!
    September 22nd, 2013 at 03:51am
  • CountSynula

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    Ugh! Such a tease lol. I was reading and then the chapter ended. Sad I'm definitely interested in this so far. I like how ruthless Brian was in the beginning and of course the description and use of blood. I love that in stories. tehe I've never seen that Genetic Opera movie but I've heard several people talk about it before. I'm feeling this story and I can't wait to read the next update. Also....I like the banner. Mr. Green
    September 22nd, 2013 at 01:57am
  • Moriarty;

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    WOW. I am a sucker for stories where the guys have a little defection with them, or they do something really weird, so this is like my dream come true in a story, you know? It's so realistic- nothing like this has ever been done before and I love it so much damn much! And that's just from looking at the summary- now I need to see the story!

    I love how he is literally going around collecting various body parts and god knows what else- the thrill he gets from killing is pretty damn obvious from how he speaks. I can't wait to see more of this- and longer chapters! Update soon please!
    September 21st, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • Ihayley

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    Wait a minute. If Brian is a heart collector, why did he take breast implants? Where is logic O.o
    September 21st, 2013 at 06:42pm
  • Ihayley

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    Wait a minute. If Brian is a heart collector, why did he take breast implants? Where is logic O.o
    September 21st, 2013 at 06:42pm
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    Wait a minute. If Brian is a heart collector, why did he take breast implants? Where is logic O.o
    September 21st, 2013 at 06:41pm
  • requiem.

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    Loving it. Can't wait for longer chapters!
    September 20th, 2013 at 10:22pm
  • wildone101

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    update please luv it very much
    September 20th, 2013 at 07:51pm
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