Make the Anguish Last - Comments

Really like how this is coming along!

I really like how you add all the little details, but sometimes it can get a bit almost tedious to read. But it really adds so much to Rein's character - I do like it.

Also saw a very small typo at end of chapter two -
"Do you think you could guide me Rove Road?"
^ should be a to in there

I really love Thomas so far! And the two perspectives on Dirk are pretty interesting, from Rein vs. Thomas's view I mean. You have really written each of them really distinctively.

Can't wait to see where you take this! *subscribed*

thanks for updating!

I liked that scene between Thomas and Dirk, it was really nice! Filler or not, I enjoyed it! Can't wait for another update!

I'm really liking this! Your writing style is very elegant and still down-to-earth (if that makes sense - it's not too flowery, I mean), and the your characterization is very realistic and interesting. I can't wait to read more! :)

I really love this so far! Especially the way you introduced the characters, it felt like I already knew them in such a short time. I completely loved the fact that he met Thomas at the end! Your writting is really well written and I can't wait to read the next chapter! ;D

I like this!

@ Dolphin of Glass
Thank you! I'm working on it!

Its sooo good!! please write more!! ♥♥♥