Aw I enjoyed the argument between val and michelle lol! I like michelle in this.....she's sassy and up front. Yay my character was mentioned. Reading this makes me want to write a7x again! :)
@ mrsmshadz It isn't like Life, Unexpexted over on the other site... I don't have a plethora of chapters already written... I have to write the story! Which I can only do in my spare time. Sometimes, I wish I didn't have to have a real job.
The kids know the truth now I hope the kids will get along after everything calms down they liked each other before they knew the truth More dramas coming can feel it haha :D
Woah this is some shit Matt got himself into!! Let's see how he fixes this shit. I seriously want him back with Beka! Is that wrong?? Lol updates soon please!! It drives me nuts having to wait more than a day lol
Bad Matt still fucking her even after he told hold she couldn't stay because he couldn't lose Val and he knew if she stay he'd lose Val because he can't keep his dick out of Beka haha Oh now River knows they are his brother and sisters, I wonder how he's going to act around them I love this story :D
Ohmyfuckness!!! I can't believe he was still fucking her all this time!!! That's so awesome!!! Amarina has to be his too!!! This story just fucken juicer!!! Updates soon please!!!!
@ mrsmshadz Originally I wasn't going to have anyone find out for a while... But as it stands, it'll be the next chapter when shit starts to hit the fan.
@ xMandiblesx Thank you!! Like I said, this story is as much about the kids as it is their parents, so I've worked really hard on developing their personalities as original characters... It gives me experience in creating them.
Wow soo....I can't wait to see how Matt reacts to all of this. I like how you gave each of the kids their own personality and involved them all in the dialogue. That was pretty neat. Can't wait for the next update!