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  • vices

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    i'm so in love with this and you've written it so gloriously and it's tragic and real and beautiful
    October 23rd, 2014 at 07:32am
  • BrittanyMorgan

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    I loved this story. So sad, and so true.
    October 7th, 2014 at 05:51am
  • MissyPrissy

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    That was really sad. :(
    October 6th, 2014 at 02:44am
  • raja sahara

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    Omg noooooo I'm so sad
    Lyle and Armand were so cute and this is just so heartbreaking that I literally just can't even imagine it. Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh at racist, homophobic mofos. LIKE WHY COULDN'T YALL HAVE JUST LET THEM BE HAPPY. But this was still soooo good nonetheless. It's my favorite story of yours and slidjlasjdasjld
    THANKS FOR BREAKIN' MY HEART, ASHLEIGH.
    October 4th, 2014 at 06:15pm
  • vices

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    this story is so ridiculously heartbreaking uGH
    October 1st, 2014 at 07:46am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    I don't think I have any other words aside from
    Oh shit.
    And that I wish this story doesn't have to come to an end.
    But this was so sad, but so real, that I just...
    Wow. You're such a great writer.
    October 1st, 2014 at 04:11am
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    this is sheer brilliance and it's touching how real this is
    July 2nd, 2014 at 07:49am
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    This is really amazing. Its horrible how cruel the world can be. Looking forward to more :)
    February 17th, 2014 at 02:11pm
  • Fandango

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    This is so... fascinating and honest and real. Wow.
    February 17th, 2014 at 08:13am
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    This is so beautiful. Armand's perspective is so innocent and refreshing. Just the repetition of lines and everything...so stunning. I'm got this pit in my stomach over what I know's coming, but I will not be able to stop reading this. You should be so proud of this. The social context is such a perfect setting for this story; heartbreaking, original and perfect. Love, love, love it.
    February 17th, 2014 at 07:37am
  • raja sahara

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    AHHHHHHHHH
    I MISS THIS STORY
    AND I FORGOT HOW GOOD IT WAS (WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME) AND ASKLDJAKLSDJASDALSKD
    February 5th, 2014 at 08:44pm
  • archivist

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    As below comment...
    Can I review this? I'd love to give it the recognition it deserves.
    February 1st, 2014 at 06:15am
  • archivist

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    i just cannot. this is the most beautiful thing ever. i'm in love with it and it's perfect and
    there are no words.
    November 13th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • raja sahara

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    crying I love this so much
    I can't even find anymore words to say because this is just so amazing and I know this is going to tear my heart into shreds BUT IT CAN HANDLE IT. Bring it on. Bring on the tears, Ashleigh.
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:20pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    oh Lyle. i love him so much. he's so wise. on another note, your writing is so fantastic and i love it. keep up the great work
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:02pm
  • oxford comma

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    THIS IS SO INCREDIBLE
    October 31st, 2013 at 05:26am
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    THIS IS SO INCREDIBLE
    October 31st, 2013 at 05:26am
  • raja sahara

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    holy bejeezus I am in love with this story and I think this is coming to a close second next to Salem because this is so good I could cry. Poor, innocent Armand is just so cute and I wish everyone was like him. And Lyle. Ugh Lyle bb. I'm so sad but I love this so much.

    I KNEW YOU'D NEVER DISAPPOINT. tehe
    pls update soon or I just might die from the anticipation
    October 29th, 2013 at 03:58pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    i liked the subtlety behind the ice cream in the car incident. it was very elegantly put, but still eloquent. i'm excited to see where you go with this!
    October 25th, 2013 at 12:38am
  • maus.

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    I shocked myself with how much I enjoyed this. I am so looking forward to reading more of this! Your writing style is so distinct. This really took me away, took me to another place where I was sitting on a tire swing in a white cotton dress, watching Armand and Lyle chat away. I could smell the summer, and feel the breeze. I am so excited for more!
    October 8th, 2013 at 05:09pm