For Unlawful Carnal Knowledge - Comments

@ polka dot perfection
Aw, thanks so much. I did SO much research on the BDSM lifestyle. It's really about care and love between two people who trust each other.

I love that you feel it's perfect, despite grammar and ramblings in the story that should have been cut. lol :D

And awww.... I'm humbled that you're in love with my writing. I mean, that really means the world to me. I just want to give you a huge hug and squeeze the crap out of you now. =) Thanks xx mwah!

@ A. J.
Seriously though, in my eyes it's literally perfect and I love how you show BDSM. #inlovewithyourwriting

@ polka dot perfection
You are soooo sweet! Thank you very much. <3

I just read this again because it's that fucking amazing.

@ Zadiekins

@ A. J.
Suuure, you weren't. You feeeeed off our pain! DON'T YOU. XD Ahah, that's okay. I'm kidding around too! :)

@ Zadiekins
Nah, wasn't laughing at your feels. (Did I rustle your jimmies) haha. Kidding.

@ A. J.
You are most welcome! Aww, I know. You really killed my feels when he died. AND THEN THE LETTER HE LEFT TRISTAIN. It's okay, I didn't need my heart anyhow. xD
Thank you, and you have a wonderful weekend as well! You're welcome again.
If you ever decided to write more for these guys, I'd be first in line to read! x3

@ Zadiekins
=) Thank you for your lovely comment. I love to read what ppl think about my stories. I was so sad when Sir died too. The poor guy was really ill and such a kindhearted man.
Glad you liked my characters. I try to make them believable and real.
Have a great Weekend and thank you again!!

I was very sad to reach the end of this story, because I loved reading it so much. Of course, you tore my heart out when Sir died, but I'll forgive you for that. ;)
I wish there were more to this, because I love the characters! But you did wonderful, and great job! :)

@ BittersweetRevenge
I'm very appreciative when I get a comment and I want the reader to know how much it means to me- especially yours. It's so in depth and tells me exactly what you liked about it. So happy you were happy by my return comment. =) hugs

@ A. J.
To be honest your reply was not expected. I can't even begin to explain how grateful I am that you took the time to comment back, to me as a reader it is touching to see that some authors do care. I didn't realize that my comment meant that much that it brought good tears to your eyes. It makes me happy that you took the time to comment back.

(We're totally long lost siblings XD)

@ BittersweetRevenge
All's good regarding posting 3 times

@ BittersweetRevenge
Thank you so very, very much for taking the time to comment. You totally floored me and honestly brought tears to my eyes. Good ones.

I'm really awed by your whole comment(s) (three times lol) I'm so grateful you took time to write how much you liked this story. And I'm really happy you thought it was good. Thank you again. Wow, just wow. I'm totally speechless right now... and all smiles. =)
Have a great day.

OMG I LOVE your siggy! All three apply to me. You must be my long lost sister. :)D

I did not mean to post that 3 times...

I have re-read this story so many times, and each time it just gets better. I see many details that while not be critical to the flow of the story they make it seem very realistic. I have been in love with this story from the first time I read it. Just the relationships between the characters is so detailed that you feel their pain in a sense. You understand what is going through their minds and why they are thinking the way they are, as well as their actions. I think that this is the best B.D.S.M story that I have ever read. It makes you feel their emotions; it draws you in and you want to know what happens after the story ends. What happens with all of the characters? You feel like they become apart of you in a way, you build a connection with them with the flow of your words. The chapters flow so well that I can't just start in the middle and be comfortable with it. I have to start from the beginning to end. I agree with Jess, you have an amazing skill that is better, in my opinion, than some published authors that were successful *cough* Fifty Shades Of Grey *cough* What? I mean this isn't some poorly written porn. It shows the times where relationships fail, and that you do have to work at making a relationship last. I love this story so much that no matter how many times I read it I just love it that much more. I have re-read it at least 10 times and I am not bored yet. In one way, I wish that their was a sequel, but in the more powerful side, I don't know how you could write one. They have their happily ever after. I don't know where you would take it. I would love to read something from Master's Point of view, but before he met Tristan, like when he was getting trained by Sir and then maybe have it continue to the end of this one. That's just what I would like to see, but I am just one person and that may not be what you want. All in all this is an amazing story, 10 out of 10 stars. :)

I have re-read this story so many times, and each time it just gets better. I see many details that while not be critical to the flow of the story they make it seem very realistic. I have been in love with this story from the first time I read it. Just the relationships between the characters is so detailed that you feel their pain in a sense. You understand what is going through their minds and why they are thinking the way they are, as well as their actions. I think that this is the best B.D.S.M story that I have ever read. It makes you feel their emotions; it draws you in and you want to know what happens after the story ends. What happens with all of the characters? You feel like they become apart of you in a way, you build a connection with them with the flow of your words. The chapters flow so well that I can't just start in the middle and be comfortable with it. I have to start from the beginning to end. I agree with Jess, you have an amazing skill that is better, in my opinion, than some published authors that were successful *cough* Fifty Shades Of Grey *cough* What? I mean this isn't some poorly written porn. It shows the times where relationships fail, and that you do have to work at making a relationship last. I love this story so much that no matter how many times I read it I just love it that much more. I have re-read it at least 10 times and I am not bored yet. In one way, I wish that their was a sequel, but in the more powerful side, I don't know how you could write one. They have their happily ever after. I don't know where you would take it. I would love to read something from Master's Point of view, but before he met Tristan, like when he was getting trained by Sir and then maybe have it continue to the end of this one. That's just what I would like to see, but I am just one person and that may not be what you want. All in all this is an amazing story, 10 out of 10 stars. :)

I have re-read this story so many times, and each time it just gets better. I see many details that while not be critical to the flow of the story they make it seem very realistic. I have been in love with this story from the first time I read it. Just the relationships between the characters is so detailed that you feel their pain in a sense. You understand what is going through their minds and why they are thinking the way they are, as well as their actions. I think that this is the best B.D.S.M story that I have ever read. It makes you feel their emotions; it draws you in and you want to know what happens after the story ends. What happens with all of the characters? You feel like they become apart of you in a way, you build a connection with them with the flow of your words. The chapters flow so well that I can't just start in the middle and be comfortable with it. I have to start from the beginning to end. I agree with Jess, you have an amazing skill that is better, in my opinion, than some published authors that were successful *cough* Fifty Shades Of Grey *cough* What? I mean this isn't some poorly written porn. It shows the times where relationships fail, and that you do have to work at making a relationship last. I love this story so much that no matter how many times I read it I just love it that much more. I have re-read it at least 10 times and I am not bored yet. In one way, I wish that their was a sequel, but in the more powerful side, I don't know how you could write one. They have their happily ever after. I don't know where you would take it. I would love to read something from Master's Point of view, but before he met Tristan, like when he was getting trained by Sir and then maybe have it continue to the end of this one. That's just what I would like to see, but I am just one person and that may not be what you want. All in all this is an amazing story, 10 out of 10 stars. :)

Thank you so much Jess. Your review touched me.
Yay! You 'get it'. I did so much research on Dom/sub relationships and it opened my eyes as well. There's so much more to it than I thought.
I'm in love with writing happily ever afters and falling in love no matter what the circumstances even if it takes the characters halfway through the story to fall for each other. I also love to experiment with different situations and age differences.
Thank you for taking the time to read me and to comment. I appreciate the feedback and the friendship. xx Take care.

I just finished this and omg it was perfect. I am trying not to cry because I hate the fact that its over. I've grown so attached to the characters and their personalities, I don't want to see it go. Even though the story is over I'm so happy everything worked out with Master and Tristan. And Jonah becoming a Sir and having his own subs. I loved this story and I love seeing the story and characters grow. I can't wait to read even more of your writing. This was a true work of art and was so much more than what I originally thought this dom/sub story would be. It's a beautiful story of lust, loss, and love and I am seriously sad to see it go. Maybe one day, even if it's in my dreams, there will be a sequel, whether it's written by you or is a spinoff by someone else with your permission. I kind of hope to see these characters again. It really changed the way I thought of dom/sub relationships and stories. Thank you for giving me the honor of reading this beautiful story. And I hope you always continue writing, you have an amazing gift and shouldn't let it go to waste.
Jess