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  • nymph

    nymph (100)

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    I am so obsessed with this story, I can't believe I didn't find it until now! Please give me more!!!
    September 26th, 2013 at 07:50am
  • maybe okay

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    @ CountryGirl712
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    Thanks for reading :)
    September 26th, 2013 at 02:08am
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    @ hawker!
    Thanks so much!
    September 26th, 2013 at 02:07am
  • southpaw

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    This is such a clever idea and I love love love how you're handling it. The chapters are short but pack a punch, and you've developed the characters really nicely. I'm really interested to see how Trevor and Charlie Ray meet, and I think the age difference also adds an element of realism to this story - soul mates aren't always the same age. Overall, this is really awesome and creative, and I can't wait to read more! :)
    September 25th, 2013 at 11:25pm
  • CountryGirl712

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    Aw this is such an original idea. I love it! Please write more <3
    September 25th, 2013 at 11:20pm
  • ahoy-

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    Erggg, your chapters always leave me wanting more!
    September 24th, 2013 at 10:23pm
  • ahoy-

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    Seems reall interesting and something I've never read before. Can't wait for more!
    September 23rd, 2013 at 03:00am
  • maybe okay

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    @ AndyBelle
    thank you!
    September 22nd, 2013 at 07:05am
  • fuckthepainaway

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    I seriously love this story <3
    You're an amazing writer
    September 22nd, 2013 at 03:52am
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    @ open water.
    thanks!
    September 20th, 2013 at 05:35am
  • open water.

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    Really love the idea and your writing style, short and simple. Really liking this story, can't wait to read more!
    September 20th, 2013 at 05:34am
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    @ november rain;
    thank you!
    September 16th, 2013 at 02:19am
  • november rain;

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    cute story! :) the plot is cute and original, and your style of writing is nicely simple. keep it up! :)
    September 16th, 2013 at 02:18am
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