A Part of the Team - Comments

Hey guys sorry for the wait I hope to upload a lot of chapters before Sat.

Oh I forgot to tell you I updated the character list. so you can check that out if you want to :)

@MITCHEAE Yeah, if you ever look really closely to the penalty box you will always see that there is some sort of security person in there. The players are literally never alone.

@PenguinsFan18 Thanks I was about to abandon this story but comments like yours keep me going so thanks :)

security?

Ok this story is awesome. I love how each guy plays a certain brotherly roll. Please update when you have time to. :)

Love that they are having a sleepover.

@MITCHEAE What part or parts where your favorite? I am curious. :)

awe that is so cute

Thanks :) and yeah I wrote this story on another website but when I copy it over it seem s to lose the formatting but I will definitely change it if it makes it easier to read

I'm really excited for this because i am honestly tired of the predictablelove stories. The only issue with this is that it is one giant paragraph. You need to format it differently and every time you do quotations you need to start a new line every time a new person is speaking. I really love where you are going with this though!

Awe thanks for reading :D I will update I promise

loving the story...update soon please :)