I can't even... the chap is so so great but... :( You can't let Kellin's mom die! Except that means that Kellin moves in with Vic... but... DONT LET HER DIE! He needs some family!
HA I EVEN UNDERSTOOD WHAT HE SAID! YAY 4 ME! xD OMG my spanish isn't sooo good but I know some :3 And this was cute and fluffy and I liked it <3 It was different from reading a "real" sex scene but it was cute and I liked it :)
So I just found this story and I cried the first chapter for Oli and then 16 made me cry because it was so beautiful. What Vic said at the end in Spanish is what really did it. I started bawling my eyes out.