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Please update soon!! This is an amazing story!(:

Aww, I hope they don't take Haruna away because that would make me sad. I believe that she was just defending Rina. It may have not been the best way to go at it but her intentions were good, for the most part. Poor Tomomi, so confused haha. Great chapter.

Now this last chapter has me all emotional, just the intensity of it just wow. Poor Tomomi losing her childhood friend.

This story is really good, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for asking me to read it. Happy mibaween

Well it looks like the deal didn't go so well like they thought. Ouch, poor Haruna that had to hurt like hell. I had a feeling that man was fooling them though but they showed him in the end.

I really think that deep down Tomomi likes Haruna, I can just see it. The way she was staring at her and ignoring everything else. OH DAMN! BEAT HER ASS HARUNA!!! KILL THAT BITCH!!! Haha I love fight scenes, they really get me going and I'm like cheering haha. How dare that bitch hurt Rina, she got what she deserved. I feel bad for Rina and I hope that she'll be ok. As for Haruna, she is in some trouble. It looks like Tomomi has some explaining to do with her friend, I wonder how that will go. Loved these two chapters <3

Alright, chapter three. So, she stole a necklace. This chapter was very good, portraying just how nervous she was to steal something for the first time. I honestly thought she was going to back out but she didn't and I'm proud of her. I was scared that she was going to get caught but she didn't so I'm happy. It seems that she is an official member of the gang now, I wonder how that will progress.

And chapter four. I think Rina and Haruna's relationship is really sweet. I'm glad that Haruna isn't a total bitch and that deep down she is really sweet and is there for her friends. Poor Rina being homeless. I can't even imagine what that would feel like. Great two chapters.

Ok so I read the first two chapters. This story has caught my interest so I'm going to read all of it and comment every two chapters. Alright, so first chapter. I feel Tomomi on not wanting to be weak anymore but I don't think joining a gang is the best idea. Then again, it could help toughen her up a little and honestly I don't really mind. Nerdy girl gone bad, I like it. Very good first chapter. Love the banner.

Now, chapter two I really liked it. I laughed when she tried to climb the fence and fell lmao. I liked that she stood up to Haruna, despite being scared shitless. I don't know if I could do that. The moment she told me to leave I'd be gone. Yeah, I'm pathetic. Ouch, that punch to the face had to hurt but I'm glad that she is getting a chance to prove herself. I wonder what she'll have to do. I have a feeling that Tomomi and Haruna are going to have a thing but I could be wrong. Like this so far

This has already scored points with me because of the banner and the katakana in it. Anyways, wow, Haruna's got attitude! She's so badass. "You'll get over it." I just want to give Tomomi a hug because she feels weak, but I think it's cool at the same time that she wants to not be seen as a weakling anymore. I wanted to give Tomomi an even bigger hug when Haruna made her go steal the necklace. I love the way you write Haruna, she's just so mean that it's cool!

I think you're going in an awesome direction with this story. Really, I do! I'm definitely going to recommend this! Keep up the great job on all your stories!

Well-written, everything is spelled correctly and grammatically correct. The text could be a little bigger, in my opinion. I enjoyed reading this story because it's different and I've never read anything like it here on Mibba. Keep it up!

Before I begin, I have to say that for some reason, the girl in the banner (despite her face not being shown) looks like she's wearing the same outfit as Gogo from Kill Bill Volume 1.

Anyways, I love how sassy Haruna is. It's just funny and yet admirable at the same time. And no spelling or grammatical errors are present. Another plus in my book. I really hope that Tomomi(?) is seizing the chance to be like Haruna. I just hope she succeeds.

Anyways, I'm in love with this story and I enjoy reading it. I'm gonna head over to the second chapter now.

This is really easy to follow along with. I really, really, like how this playing out too. I also applaud you for not Americanizing it. It will be more interesting to keep it true.

Oh and thank you for explaining things in the author notes