Ow. That hurt my head, but the story was lovely. I was hoping for a 4 years later type of thing, but I'm not upset that there wasn't one. The ending strikes emotion, and I guess that's what you were going for. Great job as always.
Aw my feels! I've been waiting on this story for a month! I'm really glad that they got back together. I liked Jinxx and all, but my otp will always be andley. I also love how Jinxx is handling things. It's nice to know that he's not mad at ash, or so he says he isn't. It's really mature of him to handle things the way he's been handling it. I serously couldn't find anything wrong with this. Well done. Can't wait for more!
"That’s like waiting nine months for your beautiful child to be born, only to give birth to a disabled octopus-watermelon hybrid."
I am laughing so hard.
But in all seriousness, this was a sad/heartbreaking chapter but in a bittersweet way. I am happy for Ashley and Andy to get back together but I nearly started tearing up when Jinxx broke up with Andy.
Haha disabled octopus hybrid xD. I loved this chapter and I'm excited to see where it goes. Never read anything like this and I love that. Don't feel bad about not uploading. We all have those times. Anyway great chapter! Can't wait for more!
No. No. There's no length for fan fiction or anything. Write as much as you want. And also I find the story to be great. There's not any negative for me. I love it. My suggestions are to keep doing what you're doing. If you want to change something then change it. It's your story. You're in charge. Keep up the amazing work darling. <3
Yay! Im super happy you updated!! Im not too sure if i should feel bad for Jinxx tho because he did leave Ashley to die...But Im glad Andy kissed Ashley!! Hope you can update soon!
I'm glad you liked it. There will be a sequel eventually though, so don't worry too much. Andy and Ashley will be together again. :)