This was amazing! Your description is awesome and it is very well written! I agree with the others it definitely has potential for a chaptered story (If you ever decided to do it that is) Loved it!
I really liked this! The layout was pretty and the girl you choose to portray Pree is beautiful. The story itself was amazing! I agree with AJ9, you should make it into a full length story because I'm interested to see what happens between them. I don't know how Priya can resist Zacky Vengeance, I mean look at him haha. I'm glad that she is trying to stay faithful to her marriage though because cheating isn't cool. Great job lady!