You Don't Have to Stay Forever. - Comments

  • DA7X6661

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    Another chapter awesome! Man poor tom lol i hope she decides against abortion! Hope your writers blovk is going away im dying to know what will happen :) talk to you soon!
    December 17th, 2013 at 03:09am
  • xoxtrecixox

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    I'm loving this story so far. However, it got sort of confusing in Chapter 2 when she arrived at the sister's house. I would have liked for you to say how her sister knows Tom and put more details in. It was also hard to keep up with the dialogue, sometimes I would have to go back and forth trying to figure out who was speaking.
    November 29th, 2013 at 01:55am
  • xoxtrecixox

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    I'm loving this story so far. However, it got sort of confusing in Chapter 2 when she arrived at the sister's house. I would have liked for you to say how her sister knows Tom and put more details in. It was also hard to keep up with the dialogue, sometimes I would have to go back and forth trying to figure out who was speaking.
    November 29th, 2013 at 01:55am
  • DA7X6661

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    You are so very kind! Im sorry to hear you have insomnia..I hope that doesnt last very long. Great chapter once again, Im so anxious to hear what Tom has to say! And I definitely cant wait to see what happens with Anna..you know her minds telling her to grow up! Keep up the great work, you are so good at writing :)
    November 20th, 2013 at 09:34am
  • DA7X6661

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    Oh my you have totally made my day! Thank you so so much..that means so much to me. It was another amazing chapter and I hope we can be friends. This story gives me hope to find someone just as amazing as him and hope for love like that :)
    November 13th, 2013 at 06:02am
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    Omg youre so very welcome! Im seriously jumping in my skin..Tom as a father?!! Oh what an amazing father he would make! Great job and cant wait for more <333
    November 11th, 2013 at 08:02am
  • DA7X6661

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    Ohh this story is wonderful! I am such a hopeless romantic too and I adore Tom..I just saw Thor 2 for the second time and im a bit obsessed with Tom "Loki" ;) I cant wait for longer chapters soo excited!
    November 10th, 2013 at 09:31pm
  • Mrs.becker

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    This is beautiful!!!
    November 8th, 2013 at 04:01pm
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    Keeeep updating Very Happy
    November 4th, 2013 at 01:30pm
  • Scars On Soul

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    Oh my god! I love this! I really do! Keep updating, please, I will be waiting, impatiently!:)
    September 25th, 2013 at 02:36pm
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    @ xDiscoBallx
    Awww you're so kind for commenting! Next one will be out later. Cheers!
    September 19th, 2013 at 05:26pm
  • xDiscoBallx

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    I really like this. I think this story has a lot of potential!

    I'll keep an eye out for the next update :)
    September 19th, 2013 at 04:44pm