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  • requiem.

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    This seems a lot like my story, Sevenfold Wives.
    September 21st, 2013 at 04:41am
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    @CoolStory.Lynn

    It will get better this is literally the first story I've ever written so I am trying to get a feel for it. Chapters will get longer as it progresses.
    September 20th, 2013 at 03:55am
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    Would love a better introduction, proper dialogue, longer chapter, a custom layout, etc. Good plot, but not exactly as good as it could be.
    September 20th, 2013 at 03:43am
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    Already love the start I'm so excited to write!!!
    September 19th, 2013 at 06:34pm
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