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  • HarleyHomicide

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    @ FrankieNightmareIero
    It's fine! I'm just a big grammar Nazi so I always notice the slightest mistakes LOL.
    September 24th, 2013 at 11:05pm
  • FrankieNightmareIero

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    @ HarleyHomicide
    Btw if it's me I'm sorry bout that I really really shit at English :/ but I'll try
    September 24th, 2013 at 04:50pm
  • Princess_Scene1

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    @ HarleyHomicide
    Which author? I'm a huge grammar nazi. XD
    September 23rd, 2013 at 02:47pm
  • HarleyHomicide

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    This is pretty good so far. The only problem is that you left out alot of commas.
    September 23rd, 2013 at 12:21pm
  • Princess_Scene1

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    PLEASE UPDATE SOON. FANGIRLING SO HARD RIGHT NOW.
    September 22nd, 2013 at 07:45pm
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