@ Lloyd Christmas Thank you! I am sorry, I know my english is horrible, I try to do my best, but I don't know many people who would want to read what I am writing, so I have no one to correct my errors. You know, I will try to fix it now, okey? Hope it will be better.:) And really, thank you!:)
I really love this story so far. The idea was really inspiring and heartbreaking at the same time. I do have to say though, and I mean this with no malicious intent at all, that there are a lot of errors and spelling mishaps in your chapters. The story is so good, it's just that those kind if errors really take away from the reading.
The only bad thing about this is the fact that it's too short! I LOVE THIS. It has a lot of potential so keep it up, your englsh isn't that bad, it's got its flaws but you can totally understand the chapter :) Can't wait for you to update the next one, I'm new here as well haha I'll send you a friend request so we can befriend each other. Cheers!
Thank you! I am sorry, I know my english is horrible, I try to do my best, but I don't know many people who would want to read what I am writing, so I have no one to correct my errors. You know, I will try to fix it now, okey? Hope it will be better.:)
And really, thank you!:)