The One - Comments

It's sounds like it!! Oooo I wish you could remember lol I'm reading your other story"Devious Desires" is so fucken cute!!

@ mrsmshadz
Brian hooked up with groupies left and right.. It was very.. Dramatic.

Ohmyjohnnyfuckingchrist! Damn it sounds so good too!!! & of course there would be cheating, they were together 5 minutes & then got married! Dang that sux!

@ mrsmshadz
If only I remembered what happened next. It was gushy and romantic and then Brian was a real dick. Lol. I have one of the chapters from the old sequel, but I cannot for the life of me remember how I got from the end of this one to that one. It involved lots of cheating, I remember that much.

Awesome one shot! I hope one day you re write it again!!

@ Lucyy Jayy
It used to be a whole story with all that :( it was awesome! I may eventually re-write it, but not right now, cause I'm already writing too many stories! Lol..

You should still make it into a full story, ya know, like the whole marriage with someone younger and stuff. How she can"t do certain things he can and he feels like he's being held back because of her and stuff. I would totally read it!

@ AJ9
Thank you :) I wish I hadn't lost most my older stories... It sucked.

I absolutely loved this and would've loved to have read the full story and I'm sad I won't be able to. Great one-shot though