Still think this story is great! This chapter may have been disappointing to you but it fit well and was a good way for Harry and Alana to fix their fight and get closer. Can't wait to see where you take it!
I don't think that this chapter was horrible. Obviously there was a lot of developing and growing on both sides, especially Harry!
I think that a lot of people stop reading at mibba and start to transfer to 1DFF, or/and tumblr. A lot of my favorite authors have done that and now they gained like 10 times more readers, I hope that doesn't come of rude or something, I guess I just wanted to tell you this or maybe even kind of as an advice but it's not my business where you post your stories I'm sorry I'm rambling bye
I actually think this chapter is one of my favorites! Harry is fnally letting her in, exposing himself in a way he said he never would. It's the same with Alana. I think its a great humanising chapter for the characters.
Gah, why've you lost interest?! This is one of my fave chapters - from Alana and Quinn's talk about harry to harry and Alana at the end, it was so cute! We really see development in Alana and harry, how they feel about their parents and how much they relate to each other and are helping each other deal with situations, and how much they've grown together. Alana's becoming more comfortable in her own skin and Harry's allowing her to be more than a one night stand. They've become somewhat dependent on each other - like, whenever ones down the others always there to make them feel better. That's so nice to see, and I'm so happy with this chapter:) idk why you've lost inspiration but I hope you find it to finish this fic! It's so well written, can't wait for the next chapter:)
I loved the chapter! I dislike waiting for you to post a new chapter because I just want to read it all, but the wait is with it! Please update soon!!(:
What are you talking about? This chapter was far from horrible, you might be losing inspiration, but your readers are loving it, despite what you may think. Look at all the positive feedback you've gotten.
Again, I got excited when I saw that you added another chapter.
Was SO glad that we got a bit of a look into Harry's life! Sounds like they have something to bond on, fucked up parents.
Lovely chapter, thanks for taking the time to update! Please don't give up, I LOVE this story (: (: