So Wrong, Yet So Right - Comments

  • HanerJoy

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    I just found this story and I love it already. Please don't forget about it :) update as soon as you can :)
    August 28th, 2014 at 09:41pm
  • Subject A-5

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    sqweee! More please!
    October 30th, 2013 at 11:18am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Again, Loved this!! I hope everything's OK with Lila
    October 29th, 2013 at 12:45am
  • amabie.

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    Awww I love protective brian :) can't wait to see what the dramas about and how brian will react :p update soon :)
    October 27th, 2013 at 11:54am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Ooh! I KNEW things were gonna go kinda bad! I just didn't want to say anything... :3
    October 27th, 2013 at 03:57am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    @ amabie.
    Yay! Sara is such a pretty name isn't it? A pretty name for a pretty lady Very Happy
    October 26th, 2013 at 11:20pm
  • amabie.

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    @ Mrs. Shadows
    Haha you're a lil cutie I'll deform be reading now lmao
    October 26th, 2013 at 11:05pm
  • Angelina Shadows

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    @ amabie.
    Lol. I totallt wasn't thinking of you when I decided her best friends name Shifty
    October 26th, 2013 at 09:29pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    I can't wait to read more!

    I love how she's so innocent, I'm sure Daddy will change that though! hehehehe........

    I really like how you kind of set the stage and set up the background story. Everything is really descriptive and it's easy to feel like you're right in the story. I like how even though her Dad is famous and has money she wants to make a place for herself in the world without having his fame do it for her.

    I can totally picture her blowing the whistle to wake Brian up and him freaking out and sitting straight up with a panicked look on his face. That was so mean but so funny!

    I wish it was that easy to convince parents to buy you a car LOL

    I love how her best friend is the complete opposite of her too. I'm surprised she's managed to stay innocent for this long LOL

    I can't wait for more and to see how the Brian/Lila relationship starts to develop! I'm excited to see where this goes!!!
    October 26th, 2013 at 02:25pm
  • amabie.

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    Wow I've never read incest fan fiction before so I'm really looking forward to reading more you guys :) I like how her friends name is Sara that's an awesome name ;)
    October 26th, 2013 at 12:25pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Sounds awesome! Can't wait to read it!
    October 24th, 2013 at 11:24pm
  • Angelina Shadows

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    @ HerNameIsAlice
    I'm working on the first chapter right now. It probably sucks though. I'm about to go to bed but I hope to finish it tomorrow...maybe.
    October 24th, 2013 at 10:28am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    I can't wait for it to get started!! Crazy
    October 24th, 2013 at 09:53am