I love how she's so innocent, I'm sure Daddy will change that though! hehehehe........
I really like how you kind of set the stage and set up the background story. Everything is really descriptive and it's easy to feel like you're right in the story. I like how even though her Dad is famous and has money she wants to make a place for herself in the world without having his fame do it for her.
I can totally picture her blowing the whistle to wake Brian up and him freaking out and sitting straight up with a panicked look on his face. That was so mean but so funny!
I wish it was that easy to convince parents to buy you a car LOL
I love how her best friend is the complete opposite of her too. I'm surprised she's managed to stay innocent for this long LOL
I can't wait for more and to see how the Brian/Lila relationship starts to develop! I'm excited to see where this goes!!!
Wow I've never read incest fan fiction before so I'm really looking forward to reading more you guys :) I like how her friends name is Sara that's an awesome name ;)
@ HerNameIsAlice I'm working on the first chapter right now. It probably sucks though. I'm about to go to bed but I hope to finish it tomorrow...maybe.