@ ninahx Hi! Thank you very much for your comment :) It's definitely one of those stories I'm considering extending in the future because I like the idea of it so much, so perhaps keep an eye out for that - you never know. Thanks again, it's nice hearing such a lovely comment on a short story because I never expected one :)
I just accidentally found this short story and all I can say is: Wow, I really really really love the idea. It's so different and unique! I don't have the right words to say how I felt, but I just liked this very much. Especially the way you described death, as a person like the rest. And I loved the last line. A great short story.
Hi! Thank you very much for your comment :)
It's definitely one of those stories I'm considering extending in the future because I like the idea of it so much, so perhaps keep an eye out for that - you never know. Thanks again, it's nice hearing such a lovely comment on a short story because I never expected one :)