January 8th, 2015 at 04:13am
Twist of Fate - Comments
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I really hate that Cody died because I absolutely loved him, but I loved the ending more. It was witty and cute and I just really love this story. It was absolutely amazing!January 8th, 2015 at 02:17am
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THANK YOU!!!
No, not all my stories are so emotional. You've read the ones where I go deep into their mental pain. This one I wrote when I was in a dark place. Same with FUCK. The suicide part is taken from my life. I like to inject pieces (large or small ) of my life into my stories so they're realistic and come alive. I am forever grateful to you for reading and commenting. xoxJuly 18th, 2014 at 08:44pm -
Omg I think I've cried during this story more than I did when reading F.U.C.K. Omg the last 4 chapters or so I was bawling and that last chapter I couldn't even hold myself together I had to stop reading multiple times. My chest physically hurts after reading this story. Just like F.U.C.K. this was also beautifully written. I can't even stop crying. I don't know why but your stories are ones that I get really emotional about. I'm not sure if its because when I'm reading it I feel like I'm really there or what but it's insane. This has ripped my heart out I can't even think straight it just hurts so much. Even though it was really sad and tragic it was soo well written and I loved it. Now I'm gonna try to stop crying. I hope that not all your stories are going to make me this emotional.July 18th, 2014 at 07:22pm
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@ EmoKitten
Thanks for coming out from lurking and commenting!! \O/ Your comments are so sweet. I'm glad you had all those emotions. I did a good job if I evoked the sorrow bit in that 'certain' chapter that won't be named. lol Yeah, they weren't blood born brothers and didn't grow up together, so I thought it would be ok. Thank you again, so much, for your compliments and the friend request. HUGS!October 16th, 2013 at 07:08am -
LOVED this! I normally don't like incest stories, but this one is fantastic!!! I love how they are stepbrothers so it's not as... Incesty. I also love how the whole story isn't focused on how what they are doing is wrong, how you only put a little bit of that. I'm not gonna lie, I was pissed when Gray took Cody, and I bawled when he raped/beat/killed him. I just love your writing in general! I love the detail and emotion and how you seem to know exactly how to toy with my emotions! It's great!!! Love this story, as well as the other ones (I'm normally a silent reader).October 15th, 2013 at 06:15pm
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@ AJM1
no worries haha! thanks for writing this! :)October 3rd, 2013 at 11:41am -
@ Ace Lightning.
Thank you for reading and the friend request. =)October 3rd, 2013 at 08:30am -
@ TropicalStormHawaii
That's an awesome compliment! thank you!!!October 3rd, 2013 at 08:29am -
this was so sweetOctober 3rd, 2013 at 04:27am
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An amazing ending... i sobbed lol <3 thank you :)October 2nd, 2013 at 09:46pm
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@ foREVer an Angel
aw you really are so very sweet. xoxOctober 2nd, 2013 at 04:59pm -
Amazing ending! I truly loved the story. Can't wait for your next story, you have officially became one of my favorite authors on this site.October 2nd, 2013 at 04:46pm
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@ foREVer an Angel
thanks babe!October 2nd, 2013 at 12:54am -
I was so not expecting that!!! OMG can't wait to see what happens next!!! Great updates like always, update soon.October 1st, 2013 at 11:17pm
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@ darkaly
hehe ur too cute! As long as you wrote something, I appreciate it so much.October 1st, 2013 at 02:23am -
With stories that I really like my comments are horribly horrendous and contain a bunch of jumbled letters, i just ehgstfeawd everything about this is perfect i don't i can'tOctober 1st, 2013 at 01:39am
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@ eragorn122
Thank you =)
He is extremely innocent, but that will change. As a kid, I grew up isolated outside a very small town, so his naviety is loosely based on my lack of social experiences/knowledge around that age.September 29th, 2013 at 08:25am -
Cody is unusually innocent for a 14 year old boy, but it's so cute. ^.^September 29th, 2013 at 06:26am
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I like it so far. Can't wait to find out what's happening with the kidnapping. Update again soon!September 29th, 2013 at 04:49am
Thank you very much for commenting. =) I love Cody too. In life and in death. I think it's an author's "Job" to love their characters, but because as innocent as he was, I believe he was the most lovable in this story. Thanks again and I'm glad you enjoyed this.