The wrong dream with the wrong man - Comments

Where are you? Update, please!

Btw, why do I feel insecure about John taking the road? (Please don't kill any character, I watch Grey's Anatomy and Game of Thrones, I'm tired of having my beloved characters dying suddenly)

I'm worried about the way Halvo is going to take the news. They are a honey moon couple, it's so cute.

Pleeeease Updateee. :)))

This is the best thing ive read. EVER.
Please keep writing this forever :3

Ahhhh! You updated!! I seriously freaking love their relationship. It's basically based on sex but they're completely smitten with each other! I love it! I'm too stoked on how Halvo's going to take the news. I'm kind of expecting him to jump and ground pound John...

@ sssleepwalking
Nope, don't. Or send me a message with details ;D

@ m-attie
something bad is definitely going to happen like you better emotionally prepare yourself kind of bad.

FINALLY! FINALLLLLLYYYYYY! Aren't they the best? I swear, they are. But I just feel that something bad is going to happen. Uh, no.
Keep writing! <3

I can't even... Oh God... Every word of this chapter captured my attention and my heart. Thank you thank you thank you for this story, it's about lust, passion and above all: love. Their love is almost overwhelming and the fact you could express the inexpressible is wow, just wow hahaha I'm sorry for my lack of words, but I almost cried while reading. ALSO, your smut scenes are incredibly hot, woman, you should rub this chapter on the "50 shades" authoress's face and say "learn how to write".

Oops, I hit submit too soon but seriously. This is probably one of the most intimate, sexy, loving, hands down best anything I've ever read with John in it. I absolutely loved it from beginning to end and just wow! Bravo. This is incredible and I can't wait to see more of them. I had subscribed after the first chapter but was still a little iffy on how often I would keep up and I'll be on edge for me if you write it. Your version of John is so great. And I just love everything about this. Just so amazing. I could go on for ages. Keep up the awesome work.

Oops, I hit submit too soon but seriously. This is probably one of the most intimate, sexy, loving, hands down best anything I've ever read with John in it. I absolutely loved it from beginning to end and just wow! Bravo. This is incredible and I can't wait to see more of them. I had subscribed after the first chapter but was still a little iffy on how often I would keep up and I'll be on edge for me if you write it. Your version of John is so great. And I just love everything about this. Just so amazing. I could go on for ages. Keep up the awesome work.

DON'T EVER APOLOGIZE FOR WRITING SOMETHING SO AMAZING.

I don't want to simply say that it was fantastic. But... it was fantastic! That was one of most amazing chapters I've ever read, I swear. I swear. Yes, so sexy and yup, they're horny. BUT, that was so intimate. Amazing. And also funny. I totally love that.. well, for me, she's basically the female version of him. And you know I love your version of him. And you, O'Callaghan, you just, so stuck on the ways she loves you. And.. Sorry for my fangirling. But too many feels.
You're amazing.
Keep writing.

I swear I almost cry when I find out new amazing stories, with "original" and full of life characters. This chapter drag me, it was like there was just this moment I was reading about happening and everything around me was not important. Really good.

Omigod, hi! New story, hell yes, baby! I've missed you so much! I was so mad and upset when the story of the teacher and his student just...disappeared! But you're back! And this story is amazing, I swear. I totally love your version of John, just your John - Cocky, self-assured—but right <3
I can't wait the next chapter. Update soon. Just keep writing, don't forget your password again and be awesome!