May 5th, 2016 at 04:28pm
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I came across this story the other day, I think it was the last time you updated, and I spent the last couple of days reading it until I was caught up. It's an amazing story. Very well written and has a lot of details. I can't wait for the next chapter.May 5th, 2016 at 07:02am
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@ GlasgowXsmile
it's super good!May 1st, 2016 at 04:24am -
@ merero
Thank you I'll be ore mindful of that. I'm glad you like the story.April 30th, 2016 at 03:39pm -
I like this a lot! your writing is really good, however sometimes in your sentences you repeat things and it just makes it repetitive. other than that is super good!April 30th, 2016 at 07:12am
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ugh I love this story so much! nas and David are so adorable, I no longer hold anything against nas. please update soon! this story is great don't give up on it! ;)April 22nd, 2016 at 09:37am
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My beautiful Max is so protective. I love home. And I'm glad that no one died, although I wish that Ariel would just tell the police that it was him because fuck josh.
Nas, although still not my favorite in comparison to Max, is growing on me with how adorable he's being with my poor babe.February 28th, 2016 at 04:18pm -
Okay so can someone just kill Josh already? Or run him over repeatedly with their car? I fucking hate that prick. I don't care how many drugs he was on, I actually despise him.
On a good note, I no longer hold anything against Nas. I'm just slightly missing my Max at this point.
Just a teeny bit.February 13th, 2016 at 05:24am -
Well fuck, okay. I totally wasn't expecting that. Like at all. It seems like literally everything is always going downhill for them at an increasingly fast pace. These two can't seem to catch a break.February 2nd, 2016 at 10:42am
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I'm glad Nas' mom accepted them. And I'm glad that Ariel finally broke up with that asshole! Josh is a piece of shit and i hope he gets what's coming to him. I'm glad you updated and I'm looking forward to more! I can't wait to find out what happens when they go back to school.January 25th, 2016 at 08:00am
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I'm really happy I found this story again. I forgot how much I absolutely adored these characters. Here's to hoping you eventually get back to writing it!January 9th, 2016 at 06:09am
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please update soon, I haven't given up on this story or you. Your a great writer and this is an amazing story. Keep writing
August 24th, 2014 at 02:52am -
please update soon, I haven't given up on this story or you. Your a great writer and this is an amazing story. Keep writing August 24th, 2014 at 02:51am
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omg i love this one! u need to give us an update ;-)July 6th, 2014 at 02:40pm
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MY EMOTIONS RIGHT NOW! I HAVE FINALLY CAUGHT UP!May 8th, 2014 at 10:10pm
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Okay, I must admit that Nas is being fuckjng adorable. Almost to the point that I can't take it lol now all I need is some Max in my life and I'll be a happy little camper. Aahhhhh you have no idea how happy I am that this story is back, especially now that I have time to keep up with updates and everythingMay 8th, 2014 at 10:07pm
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@ go.effin.nuts
Omg I'm so sorry the last update has been awhile go and I have been having writers block. But I'm gonna try to like write an update tonight because I have off tomorrow and I have some ideas boiling.May 8th, 2014 at 01:02am -
Ahhhh I really miss this story. I finally come back on to check for updates to distract me from studying for finals and I find that this hasn't been updated in a while. It's so sad
May 8th, 2014 at 12:43am -
update please
this is a great story
please don't stop writingApril 13th, 2014 at 07:12pm -
Seein Nas express this amount of emotion is weird to me. I don't know why, but it is. I'm still not his biggest fan, but I'll deal because my David is happy.
Though, i can't help but wonder how long that's going to last.January 23rd, 2014 at 08:43pm
Wow thank you I'm glad you like the story!