The Key - Comments

@ Erin.Grace.

Well, I took to your advice and broke it down into chapters. I hope this helps! Thanks for the comment, really appreciate it.

@ FOUND
No problem c: and I like the screenplay so far for what it's worth! I'm not used to reading something like this so it's different, different but not bad c: It's pretty good to be honest

@ Erin.Grace.
sounds like a great idea! I hope the script does well then, I have it on a few other sites. I'll look into changing it into a story once I've finished the original project plan. Thanks for the logical and patient view points.

you could post it both ways, Keep it up as the screenplay and develop it as a story and post it separately into chapters, and just make a note in the summary section saying it's adapted from a screenplay you wrote and posted on here earlier, and to check it out if they are interested c: (the note also serves to make sure people dont report the story or screenplay as being copied or stolen from a "different" mibba user

@ Erin.Grace.
ah, lol. Well it is still a story in the general sense of literature. Hoping to turn it into a film one day so I proposed the idea as a screenplay initially. I might look into developing it as a story, all depends on the reviews and popularity of the script I suppose.

I didn't even know screenplays where an option on here, I've never seen one. most people just write a story

@ Erin.Grace.
Apologies, it's a screenplay. The option in making this into chapters was not available. I do hope you continue reading and I thank you for your patience.

Apologies, it's a screenplay. The option in making this into chapters was not available. I do hope you continue reading and I thank you for your patience.

You should really consider breaking this up into chapters. I can't sit down and just read 20,000+ words in one sitting, anything over 1500 words is long for one chapter! This sound super super interesting, but there is the chapter option for a reason! I just cant do it! Please please please consider the chapter thing. going off the word count you have enough here to make 22 ish chapters, and that way it's easier for a person to subscribe and come back and finish what they cant in one sitting, its frustrating knowing Im going to have to find where I left off in the huge chunk of writing